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 Lazuras Arias |
This Cimmerian Dream |
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Posts: 45 09/20/2007 01:08 AM |
Floating through this gray-laden heaven On the angel's blackened wings of sorrow Being robbed of a future's golden promise The rainbow dissolves into shades of gray With the rains never ceasing their exodus From the noiseless halls of the god-king Voices commiserate from long shadows Nevermore to feel the fervent warmth Of entwined flesh that now glows pale Under shadow and a brightened moon by Lazuras Arias |
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Posts: 7688 12/05/2007 02:56 PM Registered User |
Ooooo,
slathered in the hollows of darkness, pain drifting in pale shades of gray where cold is the color of slumber.... My kind of kingdom!! hehehehe  pen here!!
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Posts: 6881 12/12/2007 05:39 PM Dark Mistress of the Lair |
A very visually written poem!
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Posts: 3555 12/23/2007 05:39 PM Elder |
Nicely done indeed.
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Posts: 2 05/09/2008 11:43 PM |
Yeah. I like this...The imagery is short but very moving
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Posts: 1 05/23/2008 11:38 PM |
This is lovely , and you capture the once vibrant splash of love drizzling away quite well
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